 shotime
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Date: July 5, 2005 @ 8:46 PM
Intro is nice... like that ish!
Flow is nice... improved mad like man good shit... Voice is nice... good for this track... lyrics were nice too... this right here is ill... the only thin that i wasn't fully feelin is the hook... decent but not like up there with the rest... good shit man
Keep that shit up!
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nymflowmaniac
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Date: July 10, 2005 @ 12:35 AM
it a sick track..keep it up..hit me
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onehizy
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Date: July 10, 2005 @ 11:41 AM
hot flow dogg,the flow put this pic in my head good story lines about your life you got my vote keep feelin that shit hot holla
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Anythanggoesent
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Date: July 10, 2005 @ 2:32 PM
like this beat and intro........like the rap... I don't know about the hook....nice work
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Talazemico
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Date: July 10, 2005 @ 8:45 PM
damn man deep track, i enjoy this track
im feeling this track like hell yo
keep doing ur thing homie
return the love - 1
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Amp
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Date: July 11, 2005 @ 10:09 PM
feeling this track bro...lyrics is good bro...beat goes gr8 wif lyrics  keep at it bro...
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Dizeazed
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Date: August 12, 2005 @ 2:50 PM
Shyt's deep man... Shyt's deep. I don't remember you tellin' me about your ex, but that's horrible to hear. The lyrics are intesne, we just gotta polish up your presentation. First off, it sounds like you're holding back on emotion. Like, I hear your emotion, but I can hear that you're only 80% focused on it... I'm not sure where the other 20% is.  Possibly readin' your lyrics?  Anyways, the chorus needs some more for emphasis (in my opinion). Like, layered vocals panned out in the channels or somethin'. Anyways, this track is pretty good. Nice work.
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shearaddict
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Date: August 27, 2005 @ 9:47 PM
why dont you have more shit out keep and layin peace hit me back
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 onewhodreams
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Date: August 28, 2005 @ 12:34 PM
I agree with Diz... the lyrics are soulfelt, deep. I'd like to hear some more emotion from you too, some of the things you say are way heavy yet your voice doesn't change much throughout until the verse about your Dad where you get angry.
Sorry to hear about your girl. 
Good track, keep it up. 
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bangsta
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Date: August 28, 2005 @ 1:14 PM
yeah man desi homie steppin' up lol, i like the lyrics man. beat is iight too. nice
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 hantu
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Date: August 28, 2005 @ 11:30 PM
lovin those strings, real warm, and the lyrics.
playlist+1 
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 Ace-RoKSteady
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Date: September 8, 2005 @ 1:17 PM
This beat come off this site.
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nicloce22
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Date: October 6, 2005 @ 10:19 AM
are you serious dont waste my time with that shit it sounds like two cats fukin.go work on your rhymes white out thats your new nickname look into my eyes tell me what you see a pissede off perto rican you faggit
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redazn19
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Date: October 13, 2005 @ 8:45 PM
the beat is really great. ur flow is a bit off the edge, maybe its becuz of ur structure of ur words. Try to get a rythme, & add some emotions to it. Add a doublevoice to the chorus or reeverb. Keep up the work man!
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deathrow1204
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Date: December 31, 2005 @ 6:12 PM
fucked up thing is..is that i can relate to almost every word you said  i feel you homie, this track brought back lots of memories, yo we gotta collab lol peace
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nymflowmaniac
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Date: January 4, 2006 @ 3:31 PM
yah fo show life sucks
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MisS-oNe
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Date: April 12, 2006 @ 6:15 PM
i can't into ur eyes....i don't noe u..ahahaha jk...it's good..keep it up!!
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MisS-oNe
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Date: April 23, 2006 @ 6:11 PM
look*
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